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Meaghan A. Kelly

Anxiety & Affect:
Solidifying Empathic Pedagogy in the Academic Sphere


My topic for research is Anxiety, Fear, and Affect in the Composition Classroom. More specifically, it's how to use these elements of emotion in a positive way. I find that in today's educational system, instructors are almost scared to broach any topic that may delve too personally in the lives of their students. And, well, I don't blame them. Before teaching at KU, we had to sign myriad documents ensuring that we would not breach any type of legal line drawn in the sand within our classrooms. From the obvious, like staying out of relationships with students, to the not-so obvious, like making sure any type of political material used in the classroom is bipartisan, we've been threatened with termination from our jobs if we violate any of these documents. That makes for an environment of fear, and constantly questioning ourselves if we are staying within the box our institution has placed us. However, this environment of fear does not end with us. Our students have received 12 years of education before coming to us, and with the way our modern educational system is situated, come from places of fear and anxiety when referring to their academic skill sets. The pressure to over-achieve is everywhere, and can be paralyzing when a student feels as though they have been placed within a new culture and expected to immediately assimilate. I believe that, with enough research, I've been able to find many practical sources that allow for safely and legally taking on the personal and often traumatic experiences that our students have gone through by using it as material in the writing classroom. Not only does this create a safer and more personalized atmosphere for the students, it also has a greatly beneficial effect on their writing skills. When students can approach a topic with experience and familiarity, it allows them to relax and actually to begin learning, even exploring their talents and different ways to find themselves within the classroom. Because of the positive effects this topic has on both teachers and students in the classroom environment, I believe it is worth the research and time I have and will put into it.

Allen, Michael. "Writing Away from Fear: Mina Shaughnessy and the Uses of Authority." College English April 41.8 (1980): 857-67. JSTOR. Web. 20 Oct. 2012.

Annotation: This article begins by shedding light on a recent review of Mina Shaughnessy’s Errors & Expectations, and the harshness of that review. Shaughnessy’s book, which is sitting on my bookshelf as we speak, was a keystone piece of research when it came to the composition classroom. Allen decides to to take on the negative review, and give his opinion regarding the theory and execution of that theory that the book puts out in to the discourse. Allen believes that Shaughnessy’s instinct to put emotion first in the writing process above all else is one that merits defense, as the emotional realities of students are what must be addressed first in the writing classroom.  Allen positions the two authors, Shaughnessy and her critic, against one another, and describes how Shaughnessy’s student-centered approach and experiential evidence work as the more plausible and effective classroom implementation technique. While this source is valuable in that it emphasizes the validity of the canonical piece of work, it tends to be repetitive. I think this source would be useful to consult at the beginning of  the process of considering Empathic Teaching as an option, but essentially all of the elements are referenced in more up to date and relevant works to the point where they are easily understood.

Berman, Jeffrey. Empathic Teaching: Education for Life. Amherst: University of Massachusetts, 2004. Print.--. "Empathy, Trauma, and Forgiveness: Classroom Implications." Empathic Teaching: Education for Life. Amherst: University of Massachusetts, 2004. 95-137. Print.

Annotation: In this chapter of Berman’s book on Empathic Pedagogy, the author takes the  reader step by step through the obstacles and successes that come along with employing  this teaching technique. He first positions the practical application within the  psychoanalytic discourse, and draws upon previous psychoanalytic pedagogy to create a  foundation for the application. Berman takes the time to address resistance to the  empathy that is central to his classroom strategy, and concludes the section by solidifying  its validity within the academic sphere. Since the self-disclosure classroom revolves  around the identification and acceptance of personal trauma, the author offers keystone  information to understanding and utilizing this trauma, and gives plenty of resources so  the reader is able to develop a fully rounded understanding of the technique. From  repression to PTSD, Berman is careful to give a wide scope of possibilities in the  classroom. The chapter is then ended with a section on forgiveness, which is the binding  principal and goal regarding the trauma that will be addressed through the various writing  exercises. I believe this source is very useful to my research and my colleagues’  understanding of the issue, particularly because it offers essential details to build the  bigger picture of Empathic Pedagogy, and does not assume that the reader has any prior  experience in the field.

--. "Introduction: Making a Difference in Students’ Lives." Empathic Teaching: Education for  Life. Amherst: University of Massachusetts, 2004. 1-35. Print.

 Annotation: Berman’s introduction to his book Empathic Teaching introduces central  concepts to the reader that must be kept in mind throughout the process of Empathic  Pedagogy. He starts with anecdotes about students who wrote to him or approached him  after taking his self-disclosure based courses and who saw him as an influential person in  their lives. This allows him to move toward what one must expect after adopting this  pedagogy. The most obvious is that the teacher becomes a type of attachment figure, and  the aforementioned students’ words came out of a place that recognized that aspect of the  teaching. Becoming a teacher that exudes a type of warmth is what Empathic Pedagogy  promotes, and Berman covers many aspects of what comes with being a warm teacher.  This introductory chapter is particularly useful in that it explicates foundational concepts  for the pedagogy and later, the application. It portrays the teaching technique in a truthful  light, covering the obstacles and successes that help the reader create a fully rounded  view. This will be helpful for myself and my colleagues because it offers many of the  introductory concepts that need to be established before one dives into the dense  theoretical and then intensely pragmatic discussion of Empathic Pedagogy.

Berman, Jeffrey. "Risky Writing: Theoretical and Practical Implications." Risky Writing: Self-Disclosure and Self-Transformation in the Classroom. Amherst: University of Massachusetts, 2001. 21-71. Print.

Annotation: Jeffrey Berman, in his chapter involving “Theoretical and Practical Implications” covers the criticisms of his stance regarding empathic pedagogy and his involvement of “risky writing” (therapeutic writing based in self-disclosure), particularly Bartholomae’s vehement rejection of the practice. Berman posits his theory snugly in the academic discourse and even concedes that some of Bartholomae’s dangers are present, but they can be avoided by making specific pedagogical choices in the classroom. Berman asserts that his theory is academic and does not substitute feeling for thinking--the two are not mutually exclusive, and they occur together in the classroom with risky writing. Berman covers the theoretical and moves toward the practical by covering every aspect that surrounds the fear in incorporating self-disclosure in the classroom. From making responsible and sound legal choices to grading policy, Berman thoroughly tackles  the gritty decision-making that has to be done with such a deviant pedagogy. This chapter will further our understanding of empathic teaching in that it makes the theory a reality, and also defends the theoretical position the pedagogy takes within the larger discourse community. By offering multiple criticisms of the technique and countering them with experiential knowledge, Berman not only tells us how this would work in the academic sphere, but shows us as well.

Chandler, Sally. "Fear, Teaching Composition, and Students' Discursive Choices: Re-Thinking Connections Between Emotions and College Student Writing."Composition Studies Fall 35.2 (2007): 53-70. Academic Search Complete. Web. 26 Oct. 2012.

 Annotation: Similarly to Simard, Chandler opens by addressing a pattern in the  composition classroom: cliches. Chandler believes that students resort to what they  believe to be reliable stand-by conventions due to the anxiety and fear that comes with  writing studies and composition courses. Ideally, instructors wouldn’t have their students  touch a cliche with a ten-foot-pole, but they continue to encounter them in their student  work. In order to parse out the environment of anxiety, Chandler starts with reflective  essays written by writing center tutors regarding their very first tutoring appointments.  While each tutor became anxious and full of self-doubt before the appointment, they  began to accept their emotions and understand them better once they interacted with their  first tutees, and realized that they were both feeling the same anxiousness in the situation.  Through empathy for another, the tutors were able to better understand and overcome the  negative emotions they were experiencing. Writing about this experience through self-disclosure aided in avoiding the sweeping generalizations (and safety) that cliches  provide for a novice writer. However, most writers in the beginning composition  classroom have yet to self-actualize and self-identify as novice writers- they perpetually  see themselves as amateurs. This step, according to Chandler, is essential to success in  the college setting. The fear and self-doubt that pervades the classroom is crippling to  some students’ progress, and Chandler moves on to practical applications to start using it  in a productive way. The author is very careful to differentiate herself from those who  apply Empathic Teaching in a self-disclosure classroom to that of the trauma in their  students’ lives. She recognizes the similarity, but is sure to highlight that her application  of Empathic Teaching is operating at a level of emotion, but not a level of trauma.

Downs, Douglas, and Elizabeth Wardle. "Teaching about Writing, Righting Misconceptions: (Re)envisioning "First-Year Composition" as "Introduction to Writing Studies"" College Composition and Communication June 58.4 (2007): 552-84. JSTOR. Web. 20 Oct. 2012.

Downs & Wardle’s article goes well with Rodney Simard’s, in that they both  reference misconceptions regarding the composition classroom. However, Downs &  Wardle take a different approach to these misconceptions, and instead of using them as  content for the classroom, uses them as the catalyst to reform First Year Composition  programs. The authors systematically address the misconceptions of FYC within the  academic scope. The sections are separated by headers describing the misconception they  address: “Academic Discourse as a Category Mistake”, “The Open Question of  Transfer”, and “Resisting Misconceptions”. The first section asks the question, can FYC  programs fulfill the goals and expectations that have been set for them? The authors then  describe how writing, although it has shared elements among the disciplines, needs to be  learned within the scope of a chosen field in order for mastery to occur. The second  section posits that in order to make the discipline of writing have any  authority of the  courses, the FYC system needs to be reformed through resistance of conventional  methods. Lastly, the misconceptions in “Resisting Misconceptions” are actually referring  to the conventional practices of the FYC classroom, and addresses this issue by stating  that the FYC system must take a realistic approach to the types of writing that will be  used in the classroom. Once these misconceptions are addressed, the article moves on to  the practical applications of changing an FYC program to Introduction to Writing  Studies. The content moves on to possible assignments within the classroom. The article  then moves in to case studies, in which the application of this theory was implemented  and the reader is given results and experiential evidence. This is particularly helpful, as  many sources focus solely on the theoretical and do not give as much practical  information.

Harris, Judith. "Re-Writing the Subject: Psychoanalytic Approaches to Creative Writing and Composition Pedagogy." College English November 64.2 (2001): 175-204. JSTOR. Web. 19 Oct. 2012.

Annotation: Harris begins her article by addressing the divide between creative writing  and composition studies. She moves in to discussing how creative writing and  expressivist pedagogy work together, and are innately similar in teaching composition.  English departments have conventionally kept creative writing and composition separate,  but this piece argues that they should be intertwined, as they are mutually beneficial.  Harris begins interweaving aspects of psychoanalysis into the discussion, particularly  when it comes to the benefits of personal disclosure in both (and one day, the same)  classrooms. When a student is engaged in self-exploration and self-expression, they are  receiving scaffolding in order to reach out to their larger community and understand those  around them. It’s clear that Berman has used Harris as his jump-off point, in that she  creates the foundation upon which he builds his theory of Empathic Pedagogy. This  keystone piece allows me to further understand this area, as Harris delves deeper in to  psychoanalysis and gives crucial historical and theoretical information which Berman  assumes the reader already knows. Harris moves on to classroom implications, and it is  clear that her experiential observations have influenced her theoretical and practical  approach, as well as Berman’s.

Johnson, T. R. "School Sucks." College Composition and Communication June 52.4 (2001): 620-50. JSTOR. Web. 22 Oct. 2012.

 Annotation: Higher education, in its highly structured and traditional reputation, has so incredibly opposed the emotionally-propelled, reactionary style of learning that it has  actually demonized it. T.R. Johnson recalls the violent school yard rhymes of his childhood, those that point to the visceral and oppositional environments that many students either create or exist in from a very early stage of education. These visceral  reactions are immediately seen as negative, and have become demonized within our  culture and often viewed as the catalyst for school tragedies such as the Columbine  shootings. Johnson asserts that from the beginning of educational history, even pointing  to the preliterate, an outburst of emotion was seen as the starting point of true  understanding and therefore true creation. It is our educational system that has used a  negative lens against it, and consequentially puts a stop to any type of emotional  reactions (good or bad) in the classroom. Johnson believes that it is the composition  studies’ re-immersion in to the conversation of higher education that offers the  opportunity to change this atmosphere of fear and anxiety toward involving emotion in  the classroom. He thinks every classroom should be one of discussion and laughter,  finding the cracks in the structural boundaries and actually celebrating them in the  process of composition. That is the only way to re-create the environment and dispel  every instance of opposing spontaneous emotion and rather embrace it. This article will  be very useful in my both my paper and presentation, as it offers both an exploration of  the issue and practical applications to begin remedying it.

Micciche, Laura R. "More Than a Feeling: Disappointment and WPA Work." College English  March 64.4 (2002): 432-58. JSTOR. Web. 29 Oct. 2012.

Annotation: Laura R. Micciche addresses multiple aspects of emotion and the effect it has  on the classroom, specifically regarding WPA work. Although most of the article is  geared toward WPA work, it does make some points that are applicable to the  composition classroom in general. Specifically, Micciche explores the violence-filled  culture that is the education system in America. After exploring this issue, Micciche goes  futher in explicating how this culture produces anxiety in both the student and teacher.  This anxiety builds in that expectations are assigned to the class and the course, and when  those expectations are not met, both student and instructor become disappointed in the  system. This continues to create negative emotions toward the course and those involved.  Essentially it is this vicious cycle that is the every day concern of the Writing Program  Administrator, and this article explores innovative ways to break the cycle and work to  dispel the environment of fear, so that both instructor and student are more comfortable in  their roles within the composition classroom. I find this article to be particularly useful in  that it offers a position that composition instructors are not privy to: the Writing Program  Administrator, and how the admins would go about helping to lay the foundation for a  more comfortable, safe atmosphere in the classroom. I think this piece would work  particularly well with the Johnson article, as it references the same violent environment  that Johnson explores during the first half of his work.

Simard, Rodney. "Reducing Fear and Resistance by Attacking the Myths." College Teaching Summer 33.3 (1985): 101-07. JSTOR. Web. 22 Oct. 2012.

 Annotation: Rodney Simard believes that before any teacher can begin to approach the  problems regarding student writing, let alone begin to remedy them, the students’  attitudes and pre-conceived notions about the writing classroom must be addressed. This  article bypasses theoretical application and goes straight to the experiential, as Simard  has found success with this approach in his own classroom over and over again. This  success has been found through addressing eight specific myths about education and  writing, and allowing the class to participate in a workshop atmosphere in order to parse  these issues out. The myths that Simard feels are most important to cover are the  following: 1) Writing is a talent that only some people possess, and although others may  attempt to learn how to do it well, they never will succeed; 2) Writing in the classroom  has no real practical application in the outside world; 3) The key to good writing is  learning all the rules- if you do that, you can’t go wrong; 4) There are too many styles  and versions of writing that any amateur will ever be able to properly use (or will have to  use, for that matter); 5) There is no room for personal or creative aspects in composition.  As long as it sounds generic and run-of-the-mill, it will be right; 6) Books and teachers  will give you step-by-step instructions to write: if you follow them, you’ll write well; 7)  You’ll have to learn the type of writing your boss or other teacher will want you to use, so  anything you learn now is useless; 8) If your elementary or high school writing  background is weak, the writing required in college or a job environment will be too  much for you to handle. As one can see, Simard covers everything from beginning  notions about writing all the way to the fears and anxieties students may have about  higher education or the ‘real world’ environment. Simard offers all types of student  responses, as well as suggestions to field these responses and spark a productive and  explorative  discussion among students. Doing this from the beginning of class will pave  the way for a more open and safer environment for composition and learning. For those  of us that have an aversion to opening up personal dialogue within our classrooms and as  topics for composition assignments, this source helps us to break through that fear by  safely positing ways to go about broaching these subjects. Specifically because this  article offers a way to begin a course in creating a positive, non-judgmental and even  question-conducive atmosphere which would be the ideal way to begin a class if one  were trying to base the course off of personal narrative and breaking the boundaries of  traditional composition class form.


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